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No, You're Right by ~romanovslover:iconromanovslover:

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No, You're Right

let's all give up.
throw your hands in the air.
cry for all that is lost;
for your shattered, broken heart.
for every dying dream.
for those who can't go on.

let's all give up.
put the gun to your head.
realize that you will never see;
your love's smile on your wedding day.
her grimace at the birth of your child.
the first steps.

let's all give up.
tie the noose 'round your neck.
understand you're giving up;
any dream you ever had.
anything you ever own.
everything you could do.

let's all give up.
kick the chair out from beneath your feet.
and hope your neck breaks.
so you don't have to feel.
all the pain that this will end.

think, now.

she opens the door and sees you there.
©2009 ~romanovslover
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i'm done.

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~Fire-Link Jul 10, 2009, 9:58:52 AM
What gave you the idea to do this?

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If you want to do something in life, go and do it.

I am a Believer in Jesus Christ, I am a Christian.

Life is worth living do not throw it away. Live the life that you have been given.

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~romanovslover Jul 10, 2009, 11:26:44 AM
everyone gives up eventually.

yet only some have the fortitude to see that their problems are only temporary.

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10% luck. 20% skill. 15% concentrated power of will. 5% pleasure. 50% pain. 100% reason to remember the name.

And jeebus don't give a flying fuck. I asked. He said "nah".
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~Fire-Link Jul 10, 2009, 4:03:02 PM
But we shouldn't give up. It doesn't help. Also there's many problems that are temporary and also lots of people have found out about this too.

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If you want to do something in life, go and do it.

I am a Believer in Jesus Christ, I am a Christian.

Life is worth living do not throw it away. Live the life that you have been given.

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~romanovslover Jul 10, 2009, 8:00:43 PM
i never said i have given up -.^

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10% luck. 20% skill. 15% concentrated power of will. 5% pleasure. 50% pain. 100% reason to remember the name.

And jeebus don't give a flying fuck. I asked. He said "nah".
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~Fire-Link Jul 11, 2009, 8:32:16 AM
Oh sorry. I thought that's what you said.

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If you want to do something in life, go and do it.

I am a Believer in Jesus Christ, I am a Christian.

Life is worth living do not throw it away. Live the life that you have been given.

Avatar from google.
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~xCher Sep 11, 2009, 4:53:45 PM
that was sad, yet beautiful.
I agree with you, most of our problems our only temporary, but no one should ever give up.
I think you meant this to be kinda sarcastic?
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